Cold or Food Poisoning

Nov 18, 2017 15:14
Yesterday I became sick.

Since I had a sore throat and a headache, I thought that I caught a cold.

Therefore, I went home early, ate dinner, and went to bed.

However, I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and a feeling of nausea, then I vomited all food I ate for dinner.

It was very painful because I woke up repeatedly with the headache and the nausea.

After I slept for about 18 hours, these symptoms were finally lessened somewhat.

However, my condition is still bad -- in such a day, I will post a simple diary like this.
風邪?食中毒?

私は昨日、体調を崩しました。

喉と頭が痛かったので、風邪だと思い、早めに家に帰って寝ることにしました。

しかし、夜中に目が覚め、激しい頭痛と吐気に襲われ、夕飯に食べたものを全て吐き出してしまいました。

何度も頭痛と吐気で目が覚め、辛かったです。

結局、18時間くらい寝て、ようやく症状が和らぎました。

ただ、まだ頭が痛いので、今日の投稿はこのような簡単な日記にします。
No. 1 Jon's correction
  • Yesterday I became sick.
  • Yesterday I became sick.
     This is fine, but usually we would say "Yesterday I got sick."
  • Since I had a sore throat and a headache, I thought that I caught a cold.
  • Since I had a sore throat and a headache, I thought that I'd caught a cold.
  • Therefore, I went home early, ate dinner, and went to bed.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • However, I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and a feeling of nausea, then I vomited all food I ate for dinner.
  • However, I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and a feeling of nausea, then I vomited all of the food I ate for dinner.
     "a feeling of nausea" is fine, but not necessary. You can just say "I woke up in the middle of the night due to a severe headache and nausea." :)
  • It was very painful because I woke up repeatedly with the headache and the nausea.
  • It was very painful because I woke up repeatedly with the headache and the nausea.
     There's nothing wrong with the second "the" from a grammatical standpoint, but it's redundant.
  • After I slept for about 18 hours, these symptoms were finally lessened somewhat.
  • After I slept for about 18 hours, these symptoms finally subsided somewhat.
  • However, my condition is still bad -- in such a day, I will post a simple diary like this.
  • However, my condition is still bad -- on such a day, I will post a simple diary like this.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Jon
No problem! I hope you feel better soon!
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